It gave me a shudder in my neck when I woke up last night,
petite it was as if ready to take a flight, 
I gave a glance to it, oh! what a beauty it was,
Alas ! don’t take away my snitch, it shouted with aplomb,
I passed forth a dark knight, blissfully carrying it in a crimson pouch,
who knew what it prophesied when I saw it again sitting on a couch,
the snitch prophesied the sky will turn black when you touch my knee,
I bent to touch its knees, when it passed me the key,
open me up , you are my master , you are my dream,
the key unlocked it , whizzing through the room perfectly like cream,
you gave me freedom, you gave me pride, keep the snitch with you,
as a token of my joy, for you are my master , you are my sky,
I am nothing but a thought who escaped the prison with a sly.

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Welcome Back..
nice poem … it was way too deep..
Nice!
And thanks for the Orkut scrap! Will be back in mid-june!
Beautiful poem
Good that you came out of your hibernation.
Hi, good post. I have been pondering this topic,so thanks for posting. I’ll certainly be coming back to your blog. Keep up the good posts
Very deep!
in my opinion,the poem had a good rhythm and had a smoothness but i think you could have added a little more feeling into it.overall it was excellent and a rare one and at the same time very original…
@ ALL : thanks!
@ amit and oorja :